Key:
Red is all the flashback shots that don't need to be filmed at or near the train station.
Green are all the shots that involve being on the platform
Purple are all the 2 shots
Blue are all t he POV shots
Black is everything else
First of all we are going to film our story cronologically so that the actors can get a better feel for their roles but then when we will film for a second time in sections and so we have grouped them here.
Shot Number | Shot size/angle | Description of shot |
1 | Establishing shot | Establishing shot of the station |
2 | Establishing shot | Shot of a train passing by at train platform |
3 | Close up | Leaf travelling past screen - Male character’s foot steps on leaf |
4 | Low angle | Character walking up stairs - figure shadowed |
4.5 | Long shot | On platform - see back of character run for the train |
4.6 | Close up | Feet dangling - see background of station behind - sound effect of train stopping - feet go down on ground - Feet disappear from shot - added sound of feet |
5 | Close up | Character pressing 'open' button for train door |
6 | Tracking behind OR side shot | Feet getting on train - behind feet or side view - not decided on shot |
7 | Tracking shot | Character walks down isle of the train – Behind feet |
8 | Mid shot | Shot at mid waist - characters sits down - camera tilts up slightly when he sits - see face of our character - looks out the window |
9 | Mid shot | character looking out window |
10 | Close up | character looking out of window |
10.1 | Tracking, extreme long shot – mid/long shot | Flashback - character is going to exit house and walk down street - He's going to walk out of shot, female character appears in view and walks past camera |
11 | Behind the shoulder shot | See female characters feet on station out of window |
12 | Close Up | Her hand pressing 'open' button for train door |
13 | Mid-long shot | Camera on table opposite characters - walks down aisle and begins to sit down |
14 | Mid Shot | Match on Action shot - Her sitting down in train seat - Both characters sitting and getting comfortable - she has earphones in - music playing very loudly |
15 | Mid shot | Male character turning and looking at what she is doing - annoyed by loud music |
16 | 2 shot | She catches him looking - awkward smile between them - looks away |
17 | Mid shot | Character looking at her phone |
18 | Over the shoulder shot | See phone light up and ring - takes headphone out - music stops - phone to ear |
19 | Close Up | See her talking on phone - fade into next shot |
20 | Mid shot | Still on phone - fade into next shot |
21 | 2 shot- mid shot | her on her phone - he turns to look at her - she ends conversation |
22 | Close up | Close up of bag - puts phone away - getting out crisps |
23 | Extreme close up | Extreme close up of male characters eyes - Looks at crisps |
24 | POV from males perspective | looking at crisps as she opens them |
25 | 2 shot | she finally opens bag - puts hand in and takes 1 out - just raises out of bag |
26 | Side shot | puts crisp towards mouth |
27 | Extreme close up | Extreme close up of his eyes - following her hand towards mouth |
28 | Side shot | she puts crisp in mouth - slow motion - adding enhancement of sound of her eating it |
29 | POV from him | side at first - turns head to camera - looks down after him getting iPod out |
30 | POV shot from her | his legs - getting ipod out of pocket - rests hands on table - showing iPod screen |
31 | Mid shot of her | Still eating crisps - Asks question relating to artist on iPod - e.g. "Have you heard their new album?" |
32 | 2 shot | Holding up headphone to ear hasn't put it in yet - answers question - about to put headphone back in ear - she asks another question - soundtrack fades over dialogue - fade into next shot |
33 | 2 shot – mid shot | talking to each other - fade into next shot |
34 | 2 shot – mid shot | characters body positions have changed - fade into next shot |
35 | 2 shot – mid shot | characters body positions have changed |
36 | tracking shots behind heads | Cut into flashback - crossing paths - cross cutting |
37 | tracking shots in front of heads | after crossed paths - sound bridge of train announcement |
38 | 2 shot | them listening to train announcement - finish conversation - say goodbyes - "This is my stop coming up" |
39 | Close up | Female character - "It was really nice meeting you" |
40 | Close Up | Male character - " It was really nice meeting you too" |
41 | Close Up | Female character - looking at male character walk past - he walks past camera - partially blocks screen |
42 | Mid shot - slight angle | camera on opposite table - walks past her - down aisle and past camera |
43 | Medium long shot | waiting to get off train by doors - turns and smiles at her |
44 | Close up | train pole in focus - face not - focus pull - his face in focus - realization on face - walks past camera |
45 | POV from her | him walking towards her - slow motion - walks right by her face - reaches to side of her - added heartbeat sound for humour |
46 | Mid shot | he reaches across her - slow motion - see facial reaction as he reaches for phone |
47 | POV from her - Mid shot | out of slow motion - "Forgot my phone" - turns around and walks down aisle |
48 | Mid/long shot | behind him - see him get off train - camera stays on train |
You don't have timing here. This should really have been planned before you filmed. There is good detail otherwise though.
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